if you are good at english please help me. will u help me!?

hello.

Hi, what is your first language?

This is your original paragraph — I will put ( ) on anything that I feel needs corrections, and number them. Explanations are below the paragraph.

Parents are not solely responsible for 1 (child) obesity; schools, fast food companies and the government also need to take action against 1 (child) obesity.2 ( )Schools today do not provide a great selection of healthy food. 3 (We are as a student) lucky that we have an off-campus lunch 4 (priviledge), but even then it is difficult to find healthy food. 2 ( )Fast food companies definitely share some of the blame. With advertising that appeals to children, it is no wonder that America is fat. Through whining for that toy 4 (that a child can get with a kid’s meal, the parent is) pressured to go to a fast food place.

1. “Childhood” would be best used here.
2. Always double-space between sentences.
3. “We, as students, are lucky”…
4. “in the kids meal, parents are”…

This is being a perfectionist, so this is a really nice paragraph. I agree with you as well! Good job!

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Eat Healthy and Exercise to Reduce Child Obesity Statistics

Parents desire their child to be healthy and be physically fit. It is quite normal when a child puts on weight as he/she grows in stature over the years. The problem arises when the child is overweight and begins to develop health issue – it is then a real cause for concern for the parents as the child is at risk of being obese. Child obesity statistics shows that obesity in the youth is becoming a grave problem in the west.

The child is considered obese when his/her weight crosses the limits of the healthy body weight. Statistics show that obesity leads to a mixture of health issues such as diabetes, high blood pressure and high levels of cholesterol among children and puts their health at risk. One of the major reasons of child obesity is the imbalance between the calories gained and the calories exhausted during activities and the basal metabolic rate.

Very often, statistics and facts about child obesity also show that it is the result of family, psychological, nutritional and physiological factors. Very often, the child is obese because they follow the eating habit patterns of their parents. In some cases, both the parents are obese and it is genetically inherited by the child. Being a couch potato is another reason for most of the children to become overweight according to statistics.

As per the research conducted by different scientists, child obesity can be hereditary. Sometimes hormonal disorders can also lead to child obesity. Many times, you come across children who overeat out of excitement or as comfort food. Some even eat to kill their boredom and stress. Statistics show that Obesity in Children has become a health issue not only in developed countries, but also in the developing countries. The statistics and facts of child obesity are alarming, and they cause major health concerns for children as they grow to become adults.

Few years ago, an overweight child will be seen as being well fed and looked after by the parents, but today, it has become a cause for concern, as being overweight could lead to inviting chronic disease and the child could be obese. Child obesity statistics show that this problem can develop in to life threatening problem for the child over a period of time. So remember, as it is well said, “Prevention is better than cure”. As parents, always remember do not over feed your child when they are full; this will only make them obese.

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Is This Letter good it’s a bad question but i am bored! HA?

so, i’m in info-tech ICT! and i have to write a letter to my local prime minister!
and i just want people’s opinions on this.

Hi Jasmine. What do you mean ‘local Prime Minister’? There’s only one! Do you mean MP?

Anyway, have a think about this for a letter

Dear

My name is Jasmine Densham and I’m an info-ICT student. I am writing to you to get some opinions on a few items that concern me. I want to know if they concern you too, as someone else of my own age. I have been asked to conduct a survey of 14 to 16 year olds regarding obesity.

My first question concerns our own city. Here in Exeter, we have only one public gym for people our age, Pyramids Swimming Centre. I think that this is a clear disincentive for young people to get fit if there are no or few resources.

Do you think you are obese or overweight? And do you think you would take more exercise if there wwere more public gyms?

Would you join Fitness First if it allowed under 16 year olds?

Secondly, we are all aware that London has won the bid to host the 2012 Olympics. Do you think this has made a difference to Londoners? Would it have made a difference to you if you lived there do you think?

Please help me in this project by telling me what you think. I will of course keep you anonymous – feel free to just tell me whether you’re a boy or a girl and how old you are.

Thank you for your help.

Yours faithfully

Jasmine Densham

Hope it helps.

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